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Dane Benko's avatar

tl;dr: Kyle is literally full of shit.

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David's avatar

And the toilet bowl is not.

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Trilety Wade's avatar

Holy *Shit* (of course) this is amazing!! Your lyricism is so on point, your storytelling is shocking and engaging, and I was completely hooked and enthralled at the shitting scene - both the literal and figurative imagery - stupendous.

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David's avatar

Glad you enjoyed! Good to know someone thinks the story isn't complete shit 💩

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Huw Tomos-Griffiths's avatar

This is amazing. Devastating use of 'aft'.

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David's avatar

Thanks, Huw! ❤️

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