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Mind Blown. My word, well done. I could never attempt a thick acrostic like this and have it make any sense, and yours is a story i not only comprehend but loved having in my mouth - plus i had to look up effulgence! Amazing work.

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Brilliant, each acrostic craftily handled

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This is impressive (and that last sequence takes it to a new level), and a closing line that suits it. Beauty indeed.

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